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Okay, this is the very first song I have ever written, I wrote it yesterday, and did some more work on it today.  This still is not the final version, and I dont have it on MP3, so the lyrics will have to do.  This is a slow rock song:

"Your Reality"

Ive been waiting for you for three days now
I start to wonder if anyone cares
Ill take you now if your true

only you can stop my pain (this pain in my heart)

and now…. Now I wait for you
and I. … I know we can be
so if … if you will take me
then I … I will be good to you

only you can stop my pain (this pain in my heart)

Ive been wating for you for three weeks now
I start to wonder if you care
But ill still take you now if your true

Only you can stop my pain (this pain in my heart)

I think about what came between us
I wish we could be the way we used to be
But you slipped back into your own reality

Ive been waiting for you for three months now
I start to wonder why I care
Cuz I don’t think you even care about me


This … this is killing me
I cant stand your new reality




Thats it.  Please let me know if you like it or not.